I like this one. I've always had an affinity for stories about immortals and the curse of immortality as you put it, and you definitely manage to get that across well. Like I said, I like it.

James

pretty good poem. too bad youre not putting the novel up. ...now when you say novel, do you really mean a rowling or paolini sized book??

if you did, thatd be awesome.

keep on writing ~~Wintertigress