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Reviews For: Biking with John
Colin Joseph 2008-08-29 . chapter 1
Nice writing.

The ages of the two characters would have been a useful detail to the reader but you missed this out.
TheAngelofhope 2006-02-03 . chapter 1
This was nice not "lame" :)
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