Wow, I must say I'm VERY impressed. I've been looking for a better insperation for my stories, and I believe I've just found it! Keep up the great work

This is a fantastic story. I was on the edge of my seat the entire time...that takes incredible skill :) Update as soon as possible. I am offering...are you ready for this? An entire, chocolaty chocolate, frosted cake for an update. With super-duper special candy flowers on the top. I know you want it.

~carm~

I didn't get the chance to review earlier (or update my own fic) because my laptop refuses to visit this site, most likely because of a virus. I'm doing what I can, but in the meantime I'll have to use the college's lab comps. Anyway, great update. I didn't find it boring, but rather very much enjoyed the semi-flashback parts, since they gave us all a very insightful view into your fic's universe. Keep up the good work, and I'll try to do the same, what with finals on the way for me. Cheers!

My thanks to you; allow me to return the favor.

- I confess I've never read a Spillane novel, though I've heard of him. This work sounds like a convincing detective novel to me. The setting is very believable, and the main character's inner dialogue is in synch with his behavior that the other characters observe.

- There is an actual mystery to solve, a classic protagonist puzzle, and you avoid the temptation of displaying prowess and superpowers ad nauseum. You also have a good 'word economy', not bogging the reader down with wordy descriptions.

- I look forward to finishing what you've written so far, and to you completing the work itself. If I may, the grammar and wording that I use is simply a result of education and my own preferences in the works that I read. Hopefully we'll be able to discuss it further in the future as time is pressing at the moment. Good luck with more!

That did clear up a lot about the history of this universe. The first few chapters left the impression that this story was taking place in our own future. The idea that the super heroes can't physically use a hand gun seems to be a novel idea.

~SirScott

I enjoyed this story. I think your writing style is unique, perfectly descriptive, and the dialogue is amazing! I can't wait to read more of your writing.

Pretty chapter. I was surprised that blast deafened Amp. I liked how you put a lot of thought into the history of your universe; that helps the reader. I hope to read some more updates sonn.

~SirScott

I'm really liking this whole noir approach to the super hero business.

It's like x-men meets metal gear solid meets max payne.

Definately a keeper.

Your writing sytle is so unique and so indepth! And your story is also very original, Kudos on that. I don't really see anything that needs improvement, I really like it!

I'll be reading more as I have time!

Please read and review my story, Chasing Princes and let me know what you think! (I know the first few chapters are cliche and may need rewritten but it gets better I promise!)

I'm liking this a lot. It's really refreshing to see new superheros. Allthough I'm often skeptical of having them first introduced in a novel, you seem to be doing a wonderful job of just that. I'm definately coming back, and you're definately on my favorites and alert list.

I am glad to see that you have updated this story. I really enjoy reading it. I always did like superheroes and action. And your profile is a big help to the story.

SirScott

Very, very interesting. It makes me think of the current event in Marvel Comics right now: Civil War, being carried out by the so-called "Cape-Killers" SHIELD uses. This chapter is like a raid committed by them. I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work.

Wonderful, as per the usual. Please don't let this story die!

(The extras on your profile were a help. Thanks)

I was just wondering if you knew that MaxxRidarr is telling people to flame you. I doubt he's who he says he is, or else he would not resort to such immature tactics.

I wrote the original piece you presumptuous **. Welcome to my block list.