I like this. I love french so that drew me to it, but I like the way you used it too. Describing the thing you want most in life, to get aways from all the pain, then using "C'est mon seul desire". Beautiful. Great job on this poem. Keep writing forever and always. Please R&R me sometime.

Twisted Harmony

I loved this.. absolutely beautiful.. Very descriptive and powerful writing! Great job, keep up the great work and God bless,

-Meme

Hm, I liked the rhyme and the idea. The structure on the other hand was rather annoying -_- Was there supposed to be stanza's or did you just write it carlessly like that? O_O! It works, I guess.