Syruppy? Hurrumph!

That was a wonderful chapter, but I think your chapters are too short. Make them bigger.

Wow, you are a great writer.

And... Poor Martin. Locked in a cell.

What a tangle.

Katy

Well, that was about the stupidest thing you could ever do. That fact that Liz seemed to think herself cool is beyond me. I think that might be where that thing came from, but serves her right. But we all know what happens to naughty catholic girls. They always meet the stereotypical profiles. We can never expect more from those idiots than that, now can we? I'm glad she's gone, Martin. SHE CAN BURN IN HELL AND ROT THERE TOO!

Good job, Martin. Let me be the first to congratulate my beloved mate on his wonderful story and tell you how proud of you I am. We grow from our experiences, you know, and you do so remarkably. Keep it up, my Love.