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| demiXgod 2006-03-31 ch 1,  | abusei like the bit about "...my loss seeps in like a poison." I'm assuming that, since it was in 1p, it's a true story. That's kind of sad; you said "Mommy," so you must have been quite young when this happened, and it must have made it that much more painful to see it die. Kind of cute, actually. I might even recommend(sp?) this story, which I've NEVER done up to date. ~demiXgod |
| Celeste Se'oir 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abuseWow...very simple in concept, or at least setting ect...but I like the depth you put into that one single rose...showing how symbolic it could be. Very nicely done. Later,~Ffuffy~ |
| pseudonym-of-mine 2006-02-04 ch 1, | abusevery nicely done. good job. |