so cute. nice.

pretty

That was cute!!

short, sweet, and to the point. i love it!

aw very cute! love the simile, it tells a lot. nice.

i really liked this. i loved the message. great job


~rira-chan

konban wa

So simple, yet so perfect. How do you do that?

Gute nacht
-Shan-

I like this. I know it's really hard to shove inspiration into a hiaku, but you've done it. Good job, keep it up!
~Logan

I had to sit and think about this one for a while.
It's so weird how you write something, and someone else immediately says, "yeah, this is me, too." I guess people really aren't so different, after all.
Good job. By the way, I added you to my favorite authors list. ;)

Presence.

very sweet... for a Haiku

I love the positivity of this haiku... it's cute and romantic. I think it's an accurate reflection of any poet or writer's goal, to faithfully convey the beauty we see into words. Great job!

As i said before u have a real talent in using words to there full potentil

Aw, it's so sweet. :) Whoever it's deticated to must feel really special after reading it!! I love it!

-Sarah

Very nice! Great job!!

i love this! so perfect, yet there's a touch of sadness to it. a painting with no yellow.