Reviews for Falling for a Falsity

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cue.dramatic.gasp. 2008-04-05 ch 3,	abuseoh my god! THAT WAS AMAZING! Totally can't wait for you to update... SUH-WEET .
bLuEsKyBaBy 2007-05-31 ch 3,	abuseHa this is great! It kind of reminds me of pride and prejudice, which is like ymfavorite book. Can't wait for more chapters!
muryoutaisuu 2007-02-13 ch 3,	abusenice story. a bit mischievious with the whole plan thing. cant wait to know this would turn out! please update soon. cya. muryuotaisuu. ^^"
Nickellye 2006-12-10 ch 3,	abuseplease, please update soon. i never read shakepears version and im dying to know what happens next! pls update soon!lol ~Nickel
Tu Morrow 2006-07-14 ch 3,	abuseI'm back!! Did you miss me? Good chapter! Again, I couldn't help but smile while I read! It's so funny!! It looks like it's been a while since you updated this story!! No, because now that I've read it, I want more! Yes, it's that good! I guess I'll go check out your other stories see if they're this good. And just because I'm going to read another one because this one isn't updated, doesn't mean you can take forever on updating so people will read your work! lol. I'm kidding. But seriously, update soon. I've never read Hamlet before, so I want to find out what happens with Bea and Ben!
Tu Morrow 2006-07-14 ch 2,	abuseHey! It's me, I'm back for another review.I just couldn't stop smiling in this chapter! It was so funny imagining a 19 year old dressed as Hugh Heffner, with the red robe and grey hair. Although, this John kid scares me. I hope he doesn't try to murder somebody or something. Well obviously you are really good at developing characters. Again, we'll see where this story goes and if I really, really, really like it, I'm going to add it to my favorites! Because so far it is good!! Keep up the great work. And I'll be back in the next chapter for another review!
Tu Morrow 2006-07-14 ch 1,	abuseHey! Sorry it took a while to come visit you and return the favor for reviewing my story. I don't get on the computer a lot.But anyway,let me say: OMG. You are a really good writer as far as I can tell. I mean, your sentence structure is really good. Grammar and Mechanics is great too. My former (10th & 11th grade) English teahers would love you! What you write makes sense. And you yourself have some wit so that your characters have it. You're funny too. Some of the best writing I have seen on FP, I must say. So, I'll keep reading this story which is very intriguing! And the last sentence of this chapter just makes me want to find out what happens! We'll se where it goes!
Gypsy Feather 2006-07-03 ch 3,	abuseWhat sneakiness going on. How fun. It's so funny that both Ben and Bea are being tricked and they don't even realize it. Where are the characters in school? High school? College?
fire-breathing-kitten 2006-04-08 ch 1,	abuseOK. Firstly; great adaptation...I was in my school's performance of the original, so I was definitely happy to see this. Not too similar, but not too different, either, and it's very funny! However. I noticed something that made me very unhappy...namely, that there is absolutely NO URSULA. What?! How could you exclude the absolute coolest character in the entire play? That's just...agh! ...yes, I did play Ursula. So, I'm a little biased.
shuushuu 2006-03-24 ch 3,	abuseo gosh i have to say that this is like the best chapter ever. soz about the late reviewing - i hadnt checked ma favorites list until now...WHOOPS!! LOL!! omg i think that im totally in love with the idea of bea andben getting togetehr. wow, there friends are really sneaky man...hahaha. so they both think that the other is in love with them and they are starting to fall in love with each other?? that is so cool. i so cant wait for the next chapter. i think that ben is so cool tho, even if he used to be a bit of an **... i cant wait to see how the rest of the story turns out...u better update really soon coz otherwise i will explode. LOL! is there going to be any more fights?? and are they eventually going to find out that their friends set them up. o hope that there is going to be a whole buncha sexual tension!! hehehe!! DDF X
Aphrodite's Exorcism 2006-03-21 ch 3,	abuseBursts into laughter This story is hilarious. Grins Update soon. Please.
InspiredSpider 2006-03-21 ch 3,	abuseOh Good! Puerto Rico huh? It's easy for some... lol. Yeah this was really good I really like Bea I think she's cool and Ben too. Oh I like them all. Alright update soon- PLEASE try not to leave it so long :( bye ~spider~
kairakrush 2006-03-21 ch 3, anon.	abuseohman,thats like so cute (: i cant wait to see them fall for each other, haah. Update soon! :D
emizulu 2006-03-04 ch 2, anon.	abuseKEEP WRITING THIS STORY! I love this play (I did a couple of monologues from it last year.)and this is an awesome modernization of it! You have fully kept to the story line, which rocks! I really want to see how you are going to get the cupid thing going!
InspiredSpider 2006-02-17 ch 2,	abuseooh i like it i was considering doing an adaptation of midsummers nights dream but i thought i'd never cop it off so kudos to you update soon i love reading twisted plots full of dramatic irony and romance ah update soon and bea is a little bit of a beotch but then again ben is a lot of a hm maybe i wont say that word did i mention update soon?

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