I can almost see the words swimming about like little fishies. Lovely! _

I like the comparison to an aquarium. Fishes

Leeona Trance

AH I AGREE! Very well-said. At least it's not as bad as the font on - well, at least 's font is a reasonable size (I COULD click to make it bigger, but I always stick with default font 'cause it's... default O.o; Um, yeah). Although this isn't a haiku (6-10-5 in syllables; haikus are supposed to be written 5-7-5), 'tis good.

uhmm... it's pretty good, but i'm not sure this is a real haiku. i think the way it goes is that it's like 5 syllables the first line, seven for the second, and 5 again for the third. The third line is the only one that's correct. other than that, good job!

Well I like it. Nicely done.