plz update

love it soo far ;D

I keep re-reading this :D, it gets me everytime. I can't wait for you to update the next one :)

Oh, good god. I'll be a real man admit that I may have cried a little. It was beautifully written and I hope to see more from you.

such a good story. sad, funny, and just adorable. great job.

Oh, lovely! I read it once before, and it was lovely then, and reading it now, it's still lovely! I cried both times I read it! Thank you for such a moving story!

Man...The scene at the pool was a TEASE. @_@; I was...so worked up that...you know. but then, NO~ Ray was learning how to SWIM. *glares*

and OMG. why did you cut it? T-T; Now. Now. i'm scared that I can't contact you. x_x; please. if you see this review; E-mail me it XD hahahaha. xD just click the 'contact me' button in my profile for my E-mail :D

Next...

Man..I knew it. I knew it! you were another one of those EVIL authors, who are very talented, VERY, and decide to ... make...poor..jake..pass away...T-T; *argh* T-T; so cold...

Next...

omg..x-x; honestly, you know how many times I've came across this story and decided not to read it? Tons. Tons. Probably, a realistic number, something like 30 times. I'm not kidding. You know why? because your introduction wasn't appealing enough! -- and MIND YOU, i LOVE this story! -- if you can, change the summary/introduction of this story; xD I'm sure a lot more readers will come floating in.

Lastly; thank you for writing this story. This is the first piece of work that i've read from you. I'm looking forward to the other ones. =)

Thank you(again). This was a great story. Really really great!

~From: Omok. Duh. Lol.

Hey there...awesome story :D I love it to bits...but...could you please send me the missing part? Thanks

Aw, this was a wonderful story! You should be proud of yourself. My eyes teared up. I love your characters, and I love the relationships between them. Marvelous story. You're a great author: keep writing.

Aw... how romantically sad... I'm still bawling.

I don't think I even have to tell you how wonderful this story was. The tears speak for themselves... Amazing, amazing, amazing...

Oh damn you! I'm sitting here now listening to Run and crying alone in my room! *sobs* Wah! Seriously, I don't think I've ever cried with any book as much as I am right now... *cries some more*

So good... so sad...

Woh. Intense. A bit sudden, and definately a bit too violent though probably I'm just sheltered and can't imagine this happening (though I know it does). To make it a little less violent, I'd add in another guy character, a sort of wanna-be of the group, but more gentle, and have him yell things at his friends about not hitting a girl or something, even if he does get drowned out by his violent friends. That would add some perspective, I think. And give the guys a bit more personality and description, maybe. Now I just imagine a three-headed quarterback called Carey-Joe-Dave, hahaha.

Oh, and kudos on the 'sexiest thing'. She suddenly did seem quite a bit sexier than a geek normally is. :P

Okay... gonna keep reading now.

Aaw, cute. I loved it already, but now I'm simply hooked. I loved how you stated Harmony's 3 realizations, like facts, that drove her nearly crazy. It made me laugh. As did the Spanish translations! Maybe it's Mexican Spanish, but I'm pretty sure "sweet heart" does not translate to "corazon dulce" and "miel" is not used as "honey". Try "carino" (with an n with the wavy thing over it that my keyboard doesn't have) or "mi amor". "Ven (not venga) aqui, carino," is very common (my spanish teacher uses it al the time). And did she seriously call her kitten? Haha, it made me smile.

Even with all the sad themes, this story is making me feel good and comfortable so far, like a movie playing out in front of me slowly. You write very well! Keep it up!

A moving story. I finally got down to writing this review after reading this story more than 3 times. It never failed to bring me to tears each time. (in the privacy of my room of course.) I certainly hope that many others will find this gem of a story.

Great story, I had to stop myself from crying in the end. I had people over, so it would be weird to just burst into tears. lol. Great story. Well organized, just awesome!

I was wondering if you still had that chapter with the "scene" if you don't, its ok.