sinful and addictive as hell! great work, my friend, great work!

beautiful. described it perfectly.

I'm loving the last four lines, although they seem a little skewed as far as syllable distribution. It would read slightly better if only it went, "Filthy lucious legs bared in the name/ of the blessed institution/ known as high school." because it's more pleasing to the eye and the brain.

Overall, really good job. It's so anti-MTV. At least, I think. ^_^

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i like the imagery in here. creative yet cynical? anyway, nice job!

Very, very good poem. You perfectly expressed much of what I feel, especially regarding the filth paraded around as [predominately black] "culture" on MTV and by the--well, we all know who owns MTV--people who run it.

Good job!

I like how this was written.