very interesting contrasts, and the third verse sounds almost sweetly plaintive in trying to convince itself. "we go on. we float. we reinvent and make anew,/create worlds in each other's images" - that has such truth in it wow.forget gods, you're amazing, so there! :P

mezzie

now write some more so i can read! : )

Wonderful representation of teenage life. So idyll and romantic.

I love it. I love it. I can't tell you why, and I can't give criticism, constructive or otherwise, because I think it is perfect. Very just--oh, I don't know. We really are amazing.

Mm...heresy. It's fabulous.

Great piece of poetry.