i adore the use of rhyme, rhythm, tone. love "an anthem for the singing by the loners at the weddings"- it's just such a perfect, lonely image.

"For the forgotten, the getting and the forgetting" I love this line and think it really embodies that their are all sorts of people that are lost and lonely. I don't know so much about lonely people being together just so they won't be quite so lonely...I'd like to think that there's SOME chance of actual love...

i love the rhyming in this~ gave it alot of rhythm~ i liked the meaning too~ good work

keep writing!

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