I'd like to see more of this, but its a great look into the pointlessness of hording all your possessions and having your life wasted. Good job.

Wow, hoped you don't feel like this, but a good description of how a person feels trapped.

i liked it. It was a well dictated example of wasted life. Bravo

great meaning in this~ but it can be developed even further~ good work

keep writing!