aww. thats cute

Love this different type of poem! Your mom must have loved it too! It's like every time blah blah, and then you and then a verb, creative foo! I loved it! I really love the sweet pea part, cute!

aww... you must really love your mom . I like the way you just kept repeating every time and then added a new feeling to the end of it... it make me want to go give my mama a hug! XD Keep writing!

Oh, and no I've never heard of that manga you were talking about, I'll have to look it up .Midnight Star

aww so sweet you gave me an idea for a mothers day present for my mom

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That is seriously one of the better poems I have read. Ridiculously cute and sweet.

You're so talented.

OX

Aw! How sweet! You just barely made the whole rhyming with "me" thing work. It's really cute! Good job and thanks for the review!

this is so sweet, reminds me of my darling mother...lol...anyway great job on this...

Aw, how sweet! One of the sweetest poems I've read on fiction press. It's the same way I feel about my mom.

I bet she shed a tear of joy, very well written

That's great, and very sweet. I really miss those days..

Very sweet, a nicely written poem. I like it a lot. It's nice to appreciate our parents once in a while, and this poem does a great job of doing so.

Thanks for your review! I appreciate it, I just joined fictionpress.

Thats how I feel about my mom. :) Thanks for rating my poem-thingy.

Aww this is soo sweet! It reminds me of an old poem I have on here for my mom for mothers day (in old poems if you want to see it..don't have to though lol) Very nice! I hope you showed your mom this because I bet she will love it!

This is a really nice poem, I love the way you repeated the 'Everytime' part. Thanks for your review! Keep writing!

Beautiful, excellent tribute to your mom. Thank you for the kind review.