I Love the mood of the poem.. Good work

A beautiful poem, very similar to those of Emily Dickinson. Your writing is amazing. It's wonderful to finally find something *good* on this website. Do keep it up!

~Christine ^.^

Ciao Amica! Bonjour amie C'est Mathieu and now its time for un peu d'anglais.

The nature of most mythological beings tends to be rathere static. I love that you use them in your poems because they are concrete symbols of one particular emotion. I really liked it :)]

dickensen-reminiscent, love the style. it's so fantastic how you combine fantasy elements with rhyming in such a specific form.