 Tad Zendol 2006-05-07 . chapter 1 That's beautiful. Really, really, beautiful. Adorable, sweet, and very dreamy. However I don't get the "TaNeesha". I hope it wasn't a large part of the ending. There is one part, where you wrote,"Us!! What a terribly short and wonderful word!"I misunderstood it as, "What a terrible, short, and wonderful word!" Maybe this was just me and there is no need to edit this line, but... I thought that you should know. |
 D L Dzioba 2006-02-06 . chapter 1*dreamy, far off sigh* Good gosh, Neesh...This would be better spoken, but I really just love the images it puts in my head. Not to mention the ones in my heart. I'm glad for the edit, thought I miss the part about not ring-shopping... But that's just me.
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