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| muffins 2008-07-23 ch 21, anon. | abusegreat job i mean twas great really |
| Apple Cherry Muffins 2008-07-23 ch 14, | abuseOh snap... |
| ManyManyNames 2008-07-13 ch 21, | abusei really liked this story! very good! a little cheesy at times, but kaitlyn says that it is and that remedies the situation! I really liked this and i am off to check out any other stories that you might have on your profile! woot! |
| Elyera Myst 2008-07-11 ch 21, | abuseIf it wasn't almost two in the moring, I would write this wonderfully long review about how great your story is. Masterful! I loved the conflicting characters, entantalizing emotion, and hysterical humor (I don't think I have ever put that many of those together before. It was kinda fun...)All in all, beautifully written. I could not stop once I started, and truth be told who wants to go out on a Friday night anyways when there is an amazing piece of writing in front of them! I can't remember the last time a story made me laugh out loud and grin like an idiot as I read on. Can't wait to read the next one, but it will definately have to wait until tomorrow since I have to be at work at six in the morning. (GUESS I DID HAVE THE ENERGY TO BE LONG WINDED HUH?) |
| amaryllisfaye 2008-07-08 ch 21, | abusei'd love to read a story for Calc finding his soulmate. he's waited all that long and to read that he's found her at last would be awesome - it'd be a challenge for him, full of denial as he's too used to being alone, and she'd be fighting for him and omg i can just picture the chemistry. write is for us? please? lol... thank you for sharing this with us btw,,take care, amaryllis |
| TCATH57 2008-07-04 ch 21, | abuseWow this story was REALLY REALLY *REALLY* (ect. ect.) awesomly good. If this was a published book it would be one of the ones I pick up and read at random points in the day! |
| Lupa227 2008-06-25 ch 21, | abuse-squee- Love it! Your characters are the best, great job writing! |
| Ebony Drake 2008-06-22 ch 21, anon. | abuseThis story is so amazing. There's no words for it! |
| MiddiVampira 2008-06-20 ch 21, | abuseHaha, loved the ending. Vamp fics are very had to enjoy because a-they're either way too buffy like(unless they are buffy fic when it is allowed) to even wanna read b-they absolutely suck cuz the author has no imagination or c-the fic is so busy being modeled after other vampire stuff like buffy or twilight that it sucks but your fic is amazing. Just enough stuff from the 'original' myths and enough imaginative new myth to be perfect. As you can see from my penname I'm quite obsessed with vampires and as you'd read from my first fic, vampires have a bit to do with it(shameless plug for you to read it please? and review :)} I like vampires quite a bit, and I LOVED your story. I don't think you're a mediocre writer at all. You're very good. Hoping to read more from you, and maybe a sequel?? Middi~(five stars!) |
| MiddiVampira 2008-06-20 ch 11, | abuseI'm reading this in one sit, but felt like reviewing. I love this story idea, and how you put all the myths and Buffy to good use and intertwined the characters. Liked the lil research bit and the Watcher bit. Very intersting story, and I LOVE it. really well written. :) Middi~ |
| Haley Hardcore 2008-06-18 ch 21, | abuseahh i loved this story |
| Cerasylvania 2008-06-14 ch 21, | abuselove it very cute but it does make me wonder what happened after did they get married was there more trouble ahead you know what did ann and johns baby turn out like was calc and jessica meant to be mates or anything at all. but i really did enjoy it. |
| SapphireEyes16 2008-06-09 ch 21, | abusei luv this story but i wish it had been a bit longer, even though itz still going in my faves, so keep up the gud work! |
| liz 2008-06-06 ch 21, anon. | abuseyay! this was a cute story. |
| clumsybella15 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuseWow. Long prologue. It's good though, but prologue's are meant to be short introductions. Not explaining her whole history. “He’s, like, my idol!” she said, her eyes glittering with excitement. “He’s a genius on the floor! If he was a defence lawyer, I’d give my left leg to work with him.” When she says "He's, like, my idol!" it doesn't sound like she's twenty. |