i have to agree with the other reviewer this time, i can't make head or tail of this meaning-wise, but in terms of language i think it's almost as good as anything you've ever written.

You do know that things that mean nothing at all mean the best things ever written? I love this a lot, and how you broke everything down was just great. Definitely one of my favourites.

*applaudes*, well written, keep it up!

Anna