I like the way it led up to the ending. An understanding and a sense of peace with a quality is nice to see in poetry.

I'm simply fascinated. I love the way you put the words near the end in bold, it was like the climax of the poem. Great job :D

This is a really good poem, I wish someone would say that to me lol.

Yeah. i love the message in this poem. nice work.

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Hoorah! Shy truly isn't the same as scared and your poem is the embodiment of strength and resolve. I also liked the first line 'Today you stopped me on the path that I'm walking on'. I can't really explain why I liked it I just did. Good job;)

Another beautiful piece. I love to read the bold alone after the poem it in itself is a poem as well :).

Great poem, not muck else to say.

I like it! Very well written, and, while I am certainly not a shy person myself, I definitely understand this and relate to it. Nice work!

I really like this poem. I think it's probably something that has hapened to alot of people. For me, it was probably my sister. But I will always continue to love her like a fat kid loves cake. No matter what she says. ^_^

i loved it, keep up the good work

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And OMG I CAN relate to it =]I think everyone can in one way or another=] KEEP WRITING! U ROCK AT IT!
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intersting nice flowing free verse poem i felt emotion but was still a little lost becareful how you word things so you dont lose your reader in the message

Ive read a few of your things but this is my fave. i would like to be able to accept my own shyness, as you seem to have done, because i feel if i could do that i would be able to be less shy. thanks for your inspiration

Amazing! Yeah you sure can describe things perfectly. Love it and true, I was able to relate. Truly great!

I really like this one. Yeah and can totally relate, although sometimes i like to forget that what they do is in their opinion of the best for me.

note: the short lines sounded a little too jutted to feel right, but the words themselves were great.