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Stephanie
2007-06-19
ch 23, anon.
abuseomgod PLEASE continue
Elinor
2006-11-19
ch 23, anon.
abuseAren't you going to finish this? Punished was good, but it makes me sad that you've abandoned Fool Moon Rising.
Wingweaver
2006-07-09
ch 22,
abuseOk, I must admit I've been keeping tabs on this for a good many months, but I was too lazy to review. I thought, "Well, this story is so amazing that it must get billions of reviews anyway." Then, just now I peeked at the number of reviews and was amazed at how low they are! My eyes widened in shock and guilt was about my person.

So, in apology for not doing this sooner: This story is absolutely AMAZING. Publish it, do something with it because it's excellency is meant for more than the archives of this website. Go forth and do great things. Because you can.

Excellent job, keep up the good work, I expect only the best!

Love, Wingweaver [or Dragid]
keefers
2006-05-14
ch 20,
abuseYaay! A whole chapter AND authors note devoted to moi!

I really enjoy your story. I've noticed this earlier, but especially in this chapter, that Ollie and Jamie make me think SO much of John and Paul. In that order. I dunno if that was intentional, or if it's just that my Beatlebrain has been programmed to think like that!

Anyway! Long lost sibling indeed! IM me sometime ... sn for AIM is LMNtreepenguin.

-Keefers
keefers
2006-05-13
ch 19,
abuseOh my gosh.

I absolutely love your story! Everything about it makes me so giddy and excited and happy! I love how.. real.. the characters are too. First story I've read on fictionpress that has had a main character that isn't stick-thin, bleach-blonde, abercrombie etc etc. Anyway. I love Penelope. I love Jamie. Ahh. I just love them all! Most importantly though, I love John Lennon. I'm a huge Beatles fan and I love all the little sneaky classic rock references that you put in. I.E. the Pete Townshend snoody-sell-out-rock-opera-smash-the-guitar bit.

Keep writing! I'm addicted!

Peace and Love,Keefers

p.s. Michael Palin is my hero.
XBroken-Dreams58X
2006-04-27
ch 18,
abuseGreat chapter, although sometimes I have a hard time picking out who said what. Could you maybe tell us who's talking instead of me guessing?? thanks!!
Mrdarcylover
2006-04-20
ch 17,
abuseI really like your story, update soon.
XBroken-Dreams58X
2006-04-17
ch 1,
abuseI can't believe this story is going un noticed. I think with a little cleaning up it would make it really awesome. I already love it, can't wait to read the rest. Krissy
BabyBarth
2006-04-15
ch 15,
abusehey! just wanted to drop a line to tell you the story is great and keep going. Im really enjoying it! keep it up!
Juniper Nights
2006-03-24
ch 11,
abusereally liking this story awesome job
ConverseOutlet3
2006-03-18
ch 12,
abuseFabulous, luv. Much better than anything *I*'ve ever written. Do continue.

Love,Stephanie
Twinkle Star Bell
2006-02-26
ch 11,
abuseAwesome Chapter I loved it. Interesting twist with making Rory gay and all. Update soon!
Heaven's One Winged Angel
2006-02-20
ch 10,
abuse0_o. wow looks like a little tension coming up. update soon ~_^
Chezzles.ze.Great
2006-02-20
ch 1,
abuseI've mentioned several reasons why it'd be a pain in the butt to change my formatting around now--if it bothers you enough that you simply cannot stand reading it, either don't, or email me and I'll send you the actual fully indented documents. This site doesn't support my indents, paragraph breaks, or anything.

Second, I do not read manga. I do not like manga. I would not rip anything from manga. I see it as a terrific coincidence, and I know you weren't trying to be mean, but wow. Harsh.
Karuli
2006-02-19
ch 1,
abuseno offense, but this is really hard to read...i have a question: did you rip this off of the manga "Full Moon"? Not trying to be mean or anything, i was just wondering... um, it would help if you indented at a paragraph's begining. then it might be easier to read.
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