Interesting, i like the symbolism in "grey-haired" standing for death and "green-haired" which could stand for hope. Nice piece.

omg *sobs* your haiku is so true and sad at the same time. but don't worry I liked it! thanx for thinking my rhyming in the barney song was good, another person thought it DIDN'T rhyme and was all critsizing it and telling me how to write it... ah well shows how much they know.

Blu

Very good use of colors and it's implied relationship to age. good write.

very heartfelt. the essence of haiku is truly captured. beautiful.

different, but i like it.

hm. A bit abstract...I liked it.

Interesting choice of words. Leaves me wondering. Very nice.

Ohh, that was really sad. I love how so little information is given but the reader can still make a little story out of it, and picture it. Nicely done. )

this was really good.

I like how you used hair color to give weight and personality to these characters. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.