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| SanguineRomance 2004-10-24 ch 1, | abuseNot really confusing at all. Very descriptive with a nice rythym. Great job! |
| DenialablyPink 2004-06-16 ch 1, | abuseTHis was a really good poem and wasn't confusing at all. I enjoyed reading it. |
| Emmi and Lli 2002-09-08 ch 1, | abuseNot confusing at all! It was great- you have a definite flair for writing. Like I've said before- I'd love to see more! -Emmi (oh, and I've just realised, don't confuse me with Lli. She also reviews people's fic, and she might do so under this account. Heh.) |
| dark*one1 2002-02-28 ch 1, | abuseoooooooooooh! good! I like it! Keep it up with poetry, bye now! ~Dark*one |
| Battykat 2001-04-07 ch 1, | abusewasn't confusing. sounds like a child talking bout their rents, rents who mebbe aren't in love anymore? ver powerful, lots of raw emotion running thru it. thank you :) |
| Bri 2001-02-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseNot confusing if you've had that happen to you before. You just try so hard to make everything all right, and in the end it all falls around you in a sloppy, bloody, soggy mess of pain and confusion that you can't sort out for the life of you. Some things that break I guess just aren't meant to be fixed no matter how hard we try to mend the pieces. Sweet pain, sweet anguish, burning peace, hating love. Confusing? Maybe for cushy people, but not for you, and not for me. |