   luv me like no other 2007-10-16 . chapter 1this is a cute poem! (or maybe i'm just a demented person) |
 hippos-anoonymus 2006-08-02 . chapter 1 this poem reminds of the Natural Born |
 Cyro Kraken 2006-02-12 . chapter 1I am digging the last two lines |
 amethystdawn 2006-02-11 . chapter 1something to ponder about...
Fab job. ;)
I love the hanging ending. Gives something to think about. I think this is very symbolic, but it's not so abstract that no one can get it. Comparison's very unique as well.
Quite creative actually.
Keep writing!
-dawn
ps: thanks for the lovely review! |
 a lonely september 2006-02-06 . chapter 1wow. this is amazing. : ) |
 just a teardrop 2006-02-05 . chapter 1i like this! short and to the point. nicely written. i like the question. |
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