|Reviews for Weeping Time|
| White is a Sin 5/31/06 . chapter 1
Oh i like this one and i like the starting and the end and the middle and i like all of it that was good.
Yeahthanks for the review _
I really like the last two lines...they're pretty
but why do you do the spacing in some letters lik s?
| The Postscript 4/10/06 . chapter 1
This is beautiful! xoxo
| Matthew James Current 3/27/06 . chapter 1
Beautiful crafting of words. You truly have a special gift with poetry.
| Luthiena o Lorien 3/3/06 . chapter 1
Oh, very nice!
| Briar's Thorn 2/27/06 . chapter 1
lol i LOVE it! it ryhmes! i cant do that...well i could but it ends up terrible. but your AWSOME! you get a BIG hug for such a GREAT job!
| Penelope June 2/15/06 . chapter 1
wow... absolutely beautiful... in a sad, depressed, longing sort of way...
| Immortal Nyght 2/11/06 . chapter 1
Amazing imagery and use of diction! Great sense of emotion! However, where does it go? I have so much hit me line by magical line, and don't really know what it all means. It seems like it could be about an infinite number of topics and extremely complex, but if its not connected, each line is just a line of good words, and at most part of a stanza. I feel these things deeply, but don't know what it is I'm feeling. This might make sense to a few with insight, as some of my poems posted don't mean much without seeing the poem they have a conversation with, but to a reader like me who has no outside knowledge, I hear great words and see beautiful visions, but its as coherent as a politician under a lie detector. I'm sorry if I sound harsh, but I, as a reader, am really torn in two, so if I sound critical, its not at you, but at my own emotional reaction to this of loving it and yet having a huge void. That you capture me with your languge as such says something, but try to fill the void, try to connect the loose ends.
| Iren 2/9/06 . chapter 1
You have really good rhyming skills. Very, very nice. I like the word choice again. )
| Vyvyan 2/9/06 . chapter 1
| the Stranger in the moonlight 2/9/06 . chapter 1
Wow. That was beautiful, though I probably didn't get the full meaning. It had such an incredible flow to it. I really enjoyed this. Thank you for reviewing my poem.
the Stranger in the moonlight.
| MaryCurly 2/5/06 . chapter 1
Your wordplay and imagery is awesome.