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| ive-got-sunshine 2006-09-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseg-d do i know what you mean when you wrote this poem... i know all too well, i got a rush from the emotion in the poem from just reading it... i understand. |
| Suicidal Butterfly 2006-04-27 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful; especially loved the last line. I've been self injuring for nine years now. It's always nice to see your not the only one with these feelings. |
| Morwain 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abusehm ah i remember those days when i cut it was a nice release and this was good at displaying that |
| Corrupted little one 2006-02-20 ch 1, | abuseLoved this one too. I can relate to it, I guess because when I was raped I became a cutter. But I'm stopping now. Great poem, keep up the good work. Clo |
| Beautiful Hrt Broken 2006-02-15 ch 1, | abusei like this one too |
| elvenstorm 2006-02-13 ch 1, | abuseLove the angle you take, you make it not about the angst but about something more. Not many people can do that. Well done x |
| poetic abortion 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abuse"her pulse slamming asainst her skin" such a powerful line, i love that line (sincerely). the writing is so sad and relatable, so perfect. lovely. ~* noelle |
| Bonfire Of The Sanities 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abuseExcellent...dark, yet gripping and real...very nicely done! |
| happypills03 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abusewow.. i have the opposite felling.. sometimes.. idn.. its good writing.. keep it up :) |
| citrus scented 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abusewell this feels like there should be more too it, but this is so powerful. really vivid and moving... "Her pulse slamming against her skin"- awesome line. really quite sad, but i understand. in reply to your email i dont think it was me though, as i cnt remember ever writing anything on the subject. |