I love this...would you ever consider doing a sequel/second chapter? :D

i like the idea of an eye kiss.

Extremely cute!

This is so sweet. I wish it weren't a one-shot - I would have loved to read more. You are such a talented writer.

...aww... I like this...

Notice: I am clearing favorite authors because I have far too many to list, so I'm putting everyone on the list on Author Alert, then taking them off favorite authors. This does not mean I do not like you or your stories.

:) CD

That's an adorable little one-shot

Loverly. Absolutely loverly. I loved every bit of it. Yay. Now I have the warm feeling of happiness in me, ha.

Cheers,Mishiema

i love this story, especially Darren and Leo. it makes me smile everytime i read it. i really hope you continue it.

Aw, so cute! I hate your narrator character, she seems like a bit of a flake, but the story was awesome2!

really hope, after ur exams r over, that u continue his story. already from the 1st chapter, its been an...endearing read. sure u won't dissapoint the readers wih the continuation, just continue!

Aw! That's such a sweet story. It's like a story you tell to your grandkids. "You know how I met your granddad? I found his snake in my bathroom." ANyway I like that she didn't kill the snake, because it shows that she really does like him.

I'm annoyed now. This is only a one-shot and I want you to write more, but you won't. Anyway cool story. I love snakes.

Much love,

Tanika

aww.. this was a really cute fic :)

AWw...

This is a pretty good story. I personally think you should make this into some kind of longer story, I'd really like to know what happens after.