What? That's it! But it was really good and then sucked me in and then bam THE END. So messed up. But you were plagerized so I can't expect you to make it into a story or something. Maybe you could just for you or on another site or something. It'd be a really good beginning.

An unexpected ending but it's an interesting story and an original look at...Fate, I suppose. How perhaps things are meant to happen. It's quite different actually and a good idea. A bit sad though :)

nice...i really like it..and the message here..

Sweet, simple, and deep. A very good example that maybe bad things happen for a reason. Loved it, well done.

I love the moral dilemma you've created with this story. You know you want him to get in there and give a good interview but your closet romantic just kind of goes no! Well, I did anyway.

Great job (:

Ah..I felt inexplicably sad after reading this. I'm going to hope that her wish didn't take away the chemistry they had, no matter how clumsy she was or how jerk-ish he could be. Beautiful job, really.

Hm. I liked this. Simple but effective. I enjoyed reading the examples of Claire's clumsiness. Haha.

-OHS

Wow, that's pretty awesome. I liked it. And, well, I'd say something else, except I can't give good reviews. It's not something I know how to do. Oh, and you might want to put lines between the different points of view.

woww I loved this 8D

Her wish was so nice and simple with pure intention. Great job

Hmm. I liked it. It seemed kind of stilted at the end, but I'm not sure what more you could do to fix it... But it was cute. )

Well that was peculiar...

Lol not exactly the cute fluffy oneshot I expected coming into this but it was good nonetheless

-Katherine

poor claire. nice story though

aw... she shouldn't have done that... nice story!

That was perfect. Amazing. You should turn this into a series.

oh wow! thats cool )