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SparklingStar25 2009-08-24 . chapter 1
nice...i really like it..and the message here..
lovenotes 2009-07-25 . chapter 1
Sweet, simple, and deep. A very good example that maybe bad things happen for a reason. Loved it, well done.
Pop the Bubble 2009-05-20 . chapter 1
I love the moral dilemma you've created with this story. You know you want him to get in there and give a good interview but your closet romantic just kind of goes no! Well, I did anyway.
Great job (:
Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2009-02-28 . chapter 1
Ah..I felt inexplicably sad after reading this. I'm going to hope that her wish didn't take away the chemistry they had, no matter how clumsy she was or how jerk-ish he could be. Beautiful job, really.
Maggie Dweller 2009-02-05 . chapter 1
Hm. I liked this. Simple but effective. I enjoyed reading the examples of Claire's clumsiness. Haha.

-OHS
Green Eyed Angel 2008-12-28 . chapter 1
Wow, that's pretty awesome. I liked it. And, well, I'd say something else, except I can't give good reviews. It's not something I know how to do. Oh, and you might want to put lines between the different points of view.
Mushypork 2008-11-07 . chapter 1
woww I loved this 8D
Her wish was so nice and simple with pure intention. Great job
AbbeyEileen 2008-10-28 . chapter 1
Hmm. I liked it. It seemed kind of stilted at the end, but I'm not sure what more you could do to fix it... But it was cute. =)
DSLuverGurl123 2008-08-18 . chapter 1
Well that was peculiar...

Lol not exactly the cute fluffy oneshot I expected coming into this but it was good nonetheless

-Katherine
Hazelnut Romance 2008-08-16 . chapter 1
poor claire. nice story though
Mikariangel 2008-06-20 . chapter 1
aw... she shouldn't have done that... nice story!
thecoconutbubble 2008-05-01 . chapter 1
That was perfect. Amazing. You should turn this into a series.
LiMay 2008-03-26 . chapter 1
oh wow! thats cool =)
found.eventually 2008-03-18 . chapter 1
WHY?!?!? Why did she wish for that when she could've wished for something more realistic, like.. like 'i hope he falls in love with me', or something? ... okay, that's a stupid wish. But GAAH. I mean, I love this story and all, but GAH. WHY. This is the second unhappy-endingish (ooh look, a new word!)one-shot i've read today. And i've only read TWO. Pfft.

Don't get me wrong, though. I really liked it. :)
x3life 2008-03-13 . chapter 1
omg totally loved it.. the what if questions that pop up...
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