nice... i can relate...

this reminds me of the song by the format im only sleeping, its wicked good.

Very good. Kinda reminds me of the song, "Wake me up when September ends," bye Green Day. Sad. Yet Beautfiuful.

I like this poem and the message it gives off but I noticed that it sounds very similar to the song "Wake Me Up When September Ends" from Green Day. Perhaps you were listening to it at the same time...?

EB

not the song! not the song! it will be stuck in my head. yours is better, yada yada... :)