Love! This is brilliant; you don't mince words at all, and convey your point with clear words and perfect flow. This is really excellent.

omigosh, I absolutely completely adore this! eli, this is beautiful!

Garbage Man

thats beautiful eli

woah. This is amazing. I love hte ending... well the whole lot of it really. It's so well written. Beautifully descripted, and has a beauty to the style, not to mentoin message. Lovely. Truly beautiful.*Silver tears stream down my cheeks*

Very good! I enjoyed it very much.