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| hardcore 2006-02-11 ch 1,  | abuse"once a minute i'm stealing your facial expressions." beautiful line. |
| FELICIA-SPENCER 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. This is magnificant. I loved the format that you used here, and how you admitted that you still hadn't confessed your feelings. Heh...love has a way of turning even the toughest person into a mess when it comes to love. Great great poem. This is definitly going on my favorites. Laters |
| Margot Tenenbaum 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abuseo this was awesome.i loved how the last line seemed to wrap it all together. |
| me 2006-02-06 ch 1, anon. | abusevery well done, i love this.The last line is so strong, it really makes the poem. i think im falling in love with your work! :) |
| Pink Sparrow 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abusenice poem! I love the repeated 'once a ...' nice job! I like the way its written. |