Reviews for A Pained Sibling - FictionPress.com

Koki Enwai 2007-07-14 ch 1,	Like your other reviewer said, this really isn't an essay. Also, why does she have blue eyes if she's Japanese? Anyway, I've read a lot of stuff like this, but is it really a true story? You cut yourself like that? Ouch. Not good.
Formerly 2006-02-06 ch 1,	First, it isn't an essay. Second, the writing is extremely incompetent--and the Japanese names are extremely out of place. Third, the whole "OMG I'm numb so I'll cut myself" thing is so stupid that even the smarter cutters try to find other explanations.