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| Shikokudarkstar 2008-05-22 ch 4,  | abuseOh I loved it! Lol. It was rather cute. I hope that you and your friend have not given up on the story. But if you have best of luck and keep writing! ~Shik |
| the lobster mobster 2008-01-27 ch 4, | abuseare you ever going to update this? |
| Ruri Star Sykel 2007-06-07 ch 4, | abuselol that's funny! i love it! keep up writing! finish please? do you even know how many chapters long you want the story to be or were you just winging it like i do with my stories? |
| allyoucaneater 2007-03-22 ch 4, | abuseAww... Nice story.. I hope for an update... if there is an update.. hmm.. this story is not finished, right?? |
| In Darkest Night 2006-10-26 ch 4, | abuseBeautiful story, the setting in particular isn't something you see everyday, and it's wonderful that you guys actually know womsething of Wicca before you write it...Much love to the story and it's authors! |
| D. Empress 2006-08-02 ch 4, | abuseNow the question's that left is when Cyprus (or Justin) is going to show up. The Wiccan stuff seemed pretty well researched... Kudos! |
| Midnights Scream 2006-05-30 ch 4, | abuseAh!The first kiss nad it was a good one!It's amazing.lol. this is a really good story, but I wish you'd update more so I don't have to try and remember everything you wrote |
| Rainydrops 2006-05-15 ch 4, anon. | abuseso...what happens next. i'm dying to know..dont leave me to hang :( :)raindrops n rainbows |
| Ashley 2006-04-17 ch 4, anon. | abuseaww cute chapter! write more please...also for the painted love I think its called. your an awsome author keep it up. |
| chyld_of_eternity 2006-04-01 ch 4, anon. | abuseO I like it! You should write more >.> Really. You should. I mean, kind of a good place to stop cause it is an ending of sorts...but...more...I crave it! ^^ |
| Kitsune Luver 2006-03-20 ch 4, anon. | abuseAww! So cute! I can't wait for more! Brecken and Pete are so adorable. And I can't believe that you started another story. I want more! I hope that you update soon! Much Luv! |
| Becks-007 2006-03-14 ch 4, | abuseGood chapter ^_^ |
| Tyra Kaelar 2006-03-11 ch 4, | abuseLoving the story so far, totally agree with you, Esquirella's awesome, and you guys are doing a great job with this one so far. I was wondering where you are going to take this one 'cuz the summary doesn't really say. Looking forward to the next chapter, post soon. |
| V 2006-03-08 ch 4, anon. | abuseSuch a sweet story. I really adore Brecken and am glad that Pete is pretty open-minded. The first kiss was ab-fab! Well, I assume it's the first of many kisses. It is, right? Love the story, great work! |
| Jayn 2006-03-02 ch 4, | abuseAww! They kissed! Yes!! So, they considered Boyfriends now. ^_^ PLEASE update! |