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| Extraho-Uxor 2006-03-01 ch 1, | abusevery nice... dont we all wish? I hate to use this as a means of communication but I have no other choice... where are you? you havent reviewed my stuff in forever and you havent emailed me or called me... maybe this will get to you since I know you update... just give me something all right? |
| Faithless Juliet 2006-02-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is such an uncomplicated narrative. Uncluttered, just honest verse birthed from both wish and dream. I think everyone wants what you’ve described here, but like all things, life jus isn’t that simple. Juliet. |
| Moon-Chaser 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abuseI can feel the emotions flowing through this. You wrote this with powerful emotions. I love the structure of this poem and the getneral flow of it. The ending was beautifully done. Keep it up. I hope this is the start of you posting more of your wonderful poems. |