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Extraho-Uxor
2006-03-01
ch 1,
abusevery nice... dont we all wish? I hate to use this as a means of communication but I have no other choice... where are you? you havent reviewed my stuff in forever and you havent emailed me or called me... maybe this will get to you since I know you update... just give me something all right?
Faithless Juliet
2006-02-07
ch 1,
abuseThis is such an uncomplicated narrative. Uncluttered, just honest verse birthed from both wish and dream. I think everyone wants what you’ve described here, but like all things, life jus isn’t that simple.

Juliet.
Moon-Chaser
2006-02-06
ch 1,
abuseI can feel the emotions flowing through this. You wrote this with powerful emotions. I love the structure of this poem and the getneral flow of it. The ending was beautifully done.

Keep it up.

I hope this is the start of you posting more of your wonderful poems.
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