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| crynowlaughlater 2006-02-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseI hate to say it but this is so true, oh woe on society and what it puts the youth through. nice job, Bravo! |
| Elizabeth Bilberry 2006-02-07 ch 1, | abuseThe title of the poem itself, makes me cringe already. It's a poem that shows a harsh yet real truth about most people today and their ideals on what's 'pretty'. |
| Faithless Juliet 2006-02-07 ch 1, | abuseYou’re not good enough the way you areYou’re potentially pretty if you try really hard-Such a strong and passionate theme for this. I used to think that if I tried to look appealing that I would betray my passion to not be like everybody else; but that didn’t work. We all look the way we look, (beauty really is in the eye of the beholder, I mean look at Lisa-Marie and Michael.) I don’t really understand why people have plastic surgery to look like other people, its beyond me. I would never want to look like somebody else. Great work here, I’m glad to see you posting again. Juliet. |
| Moon-Chaser 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abuseI can feel the sarcasm hit me! I love the whole feel of this poem and the emotions from this. I agree with everything that it being said and the words between the lines. Keep it up. |