|Reviews for Take My Breath|
| Morcirith 2/9/06 . chapter 1
i suggest turning the knife somewhere other than on you.
| Elizabeth Bilberry 2/7/06 . chapter 1
People usually associate the saying, 'take my breath away,' with happy thoughts - it's interesting because this poem makes one look at that expression in a new light.
| Greenwords05 2/6/06 . chapter 1
wow.. i dont think ill ever be able to hear take my breath away in the same way ever again. wow..
| xoxoMizzatxoxo 2/6/06 . chapter 1
Aww..very sad. This like serisouly almsot made me cry, but maybe thats just because I'm really pissed off and when I'm mad I like cry. But anywho this is good.
| just a teardrop 2/6/06 . chapter 1
i love this. and i can relate. beautiful work. i love the last two lines. beautiful.