i suggest turning the knife somewhere other than on you.

People usually associate the saying, 'take my breath away,' with happy thoughts - it's interesting because this poem makes one look at that expression in a new light.

EB

wow.. i dont think ill ever be able to hear take my breath away in the same way ever again. wow..

Aww..very sad. This like serisouly almsot made me cry, but maybe thats just because I'm really pissed off and when I'm mad I like cry. But anywho this is good.

i love this. and i can relate. beautiful work. i love the last two lines. beautiful.