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| Ethereal Kisses 2006-02-08 ch 1, | abuseHey! Nice to have you back again! Wow, do you know how much I admire you? A lot. You somehow always link your work to a real issue, to a real period of history or to something that means something instead of a lot of abstract words on a page. This poem is, as always, awesome. Your use of imagery and grasp of language just gets better and better. Wow. ~ Ethereal Kisses ~ |
| method acting 2006-02-08 ch 1, | abuseI enjoy these pieces. Excellent title, descriptions, flow, everything. "The fortress rises a glorious tombstone For all witnesses to entrust their sight To a glory that lasts like a wind blown In between the realms of courage and fright." Excellent. I can't think of any other words, but you are a talented writer. Very much so. Thanks for sharing. |