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Ethereal Kisses
2006-02-08
ch 1,
abuseHey!

Nice to have you back again!

Wow, do you know how much I admire you? A lot. You somehow always link your work to a real issue, to a real period of history or to something that means something instead of a lot of abstract words on a page. This poem is, as always, awesome.

Your use of imagery and grasp of language just gets better and better.

Wow.

~ Ethereal Kisses ~
method acting
2006-02-08
ch 1,
abuseI enjoy these pieces. Excellent title, descriptions, flow, everything. "The fortress rises a glorious tombstone

For all witnesses to entrust their sight

To a glory that lasts like a wind blown

In between the realms of courage and fright."

Excellent. I can't think of any other words, but you are a talented writer. Very much so. Thanks for sharing.
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