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Two Screwed Up People
Morcirith
2006-02-09 . chapter 1
surprising ending. i wonder if this was supposed to be funny (i thought so). what's with the random capitalization? what do those terms represent?
Elizabeth Bilberry
2006-02-07 . chapter 1
It's ironic how the little afterthoughts are telling the exact opposite of what the speaker is saying. Maybe we all have that little voice in our heads that is telling the truth that we would not admit.
EB
xoxoMizzatxoxo
2006-02-06 . chapter 1
Woah. Very good. I love the parantheses and how they contridicted what you had just said. I also love the pain and the anger. Great job!
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