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| Amethyst Asheryn 2007-04-22 ch 1, | abuseIntriguing...Now I want to know why she's running and who she's running from. :):) Tschau! *Ashe* |
| RoxyFairy 2007-04-10 ch 1, | abusecool. reminds me of that one rescuers (i cant spell) movies with the giant egle... well, im excited! yes, im encourageing you to write, this is really good. i want to know more on the egg... |
| janajyo 2007-01-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is good(as you can see I am going on a Captain Lucky reading/reviewing spree...:D). So...when are you gonna do the rest? Or is it part of one of the stories you have up, I'll check. If not, PLEASE write more on it. I like what you have and it sounds like it could be really interesting! JJ |
| Adrienne Jones 2006-06-17 ch 1, | abuseThis sounds really cool. You should definately continue! |
| Pheobe Meryll 2006-05-17 ch 1, | abuseaw! This is great too. Such a little fantasy-story scene. Could feel and see the whole thing. When you're speaking about the eagle, you switch from "he" to "it" - you should stick to one of the two for continuity's sake. Best prose of yours I've read thus far. *glomps* |
| hi 2006-03-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseit looks pretty good and i would like to read more |
| Kahn the Hun 2006-02-12 ch 1, | abuseOh... Me like. I found you by the way. Captain Lucky, you are awesome! And that's not a biased opinion. Just one thing though...I really don't understand the beginning. Please try to clarify it. |