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Reviews For: Taking Flight

Amethyst Asheryn
2007-04-22
ch 1,
abuseIntriguing...Now I want to know why she's running and who she's running from. :):) Tschau! *Ashe*
RoxyFairy
2007-04-10
ch 1,
abusecool. reminds me of that one rescuers (i cant spell) movies with the giant egle... well, im excited! yes, im encourageing you to write, this is really good. i want to know more on the egg...
janajyo
2007-01-17
ch 1,
abuseThis is good(as you can see I am going on a Captain Lucky reading/reviewing spree...:D). So...when are you gonna do the rest? Or is it part of one of the stories you have up, I'll check. If not, PLEASE write more on it. I like what you have and it sounds like it could be really interesting!
JJ
Adrienne Jones
2006-06-17
ch 1,
abuseThis sounds really cool. You should definately continue!
Pheobe Meryll
2006-05-17
ch 1,
abuseaw! This is great too. Such a little fantasy-story scene. Could feel and see the whole thing. When you're speaking about the eagle, you switch from "he" to "it" - you should stick to one of the two for continuity's sake. Best prose of yours I've read thus far. *glomps*
hi
2006-03-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseit looks pretty good and i would like to read more
Kahn the Hun
2006-02-12
ch 1,
abuseOh... Me like. I found you by the way. Captain Lucky, you are awesome! And that's not a biased opinion. Just one thing though...I really don't understand the beginning. Please try to clarify it.
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