 Alteng 2006-02-09 . chapter 1Hey, good for you! See that you are still around! Oh, and Ho Bunna should have ate the flowers. I have a thing for eating flowers and such.
I enjoyed this piece, as I always do with your works. |
 Etenebris 2006-02-08 . chapter 1I loved it! Amazingly macabre (or perhaps just disturbing) and hilarious, it had me in hysterics within moments! Okay, did that have enough assonance for you? Or is it alliteration? Dangit...
There was only one typo I saw throughout your little story here, and it was merely a "personal preference" sort of thing, so no need to worry. Keep writing these morbid little shorts! We need a sequel! Or, seeing as how Georgie-Porgie is no longer in our world, perhaps a prequel? Or the story of the Gangsta Bunna? |