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| Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-18 ch 1,  | abuseHow dreamy! An excellent fable/explanation about the beginning of the earth. I like the idea of it being spun and gathered together by a traveling space-deity, or whoever the mysterious girl might be. I liked how use the sun as a character, too. Very well-written! |
| Triden 2006-02-19 ch 1, | abuseI like that! it's an interesting creation story, scientic and magical. i like your take on the sun, it'svery original. ~Triden |