How dreamy!

An excellent fable/explanation about the beginning of the earth. I like the idea of it being spun and gathered together by a traveling space-deity, or whoever the mysterious girl might be. I liked how use the sun as a character, too.

Very well-written!

I like that! it's an interesting creation story, scientic and magical. i like your take on the sun, it'svery original.

~Triden