interesting~ i like the imagery and your choice of words~ good work

keep writing!

it's well written. salvador dali is great.

i think it's perfect, man. i used to have salvador dali nightmares, if that makes any sense. great effect.

"that salvador dali smile" perfect. seriously, so perfect. love it. love it.

~* noelle

I like it. I'm not quite sure what you mean by "salvador dali smile" but since Mona Lisa has a quiet smile, I'll assume that you mean a wide, open grin. Personally I like Dali more than Da Vinci... he makes less sense.

I like this poem. It made me think.

~Leeona Trance

I like it. I think I know what Dali you're talking about too. I wrote a poem on a Dali painting a while back.