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| Still Pretending 2006-09-07 ch 1,   | I really like this one, ur a good poet... like very good with words... anyway, it's very dark and I guess that why I like it so much. |
| Surfacing 2006-08-05 ch 1, | Holy! F*cking sh*t! I LOVE THIS! great work) keep it up;) |
| ShadesofBlue69 2006-03-05 ch 1, | hm, i don't like this one as much as your others...it seems to simply angsty...but then again maybe thats not a bad thing, and it might just be because that i feel happy today that i haven't tuned into this. i really don't like the "she slowly dies" line...just seems to angsty again. but i do like the idea of clawing through her memories, and crying in darkness.It feels like this poem should flow together, and it doesn't, and the format just doesn't seem to fit it.We can't produce perfect work all the time, and alot of your other stuff is good. |
| Blazing Icecrystals 2006-02-06 ch 1, | I love it. There's no better word to describe this than amazing. Good job. |
| poemkitten7 2006-02-06 ch 1, | Oh!! This poem is so sad and tragic. But very nicely written. I love the bold words and how each line holds something really powerful. Good job! |
| e a t i n g . f l o w e r s 2006-02-06 ch 1, | very simple, and to the point. Keep it up! |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-02-06 ch 1, | The word twists and dark aspects of this work well, as the flow is enhanced by the images that are created. Has an excellent lyrical feel to it. Good work. |