Wow! I totally wish I was falling for someone like you have! It's the one thing I hope for everyday! lol...no def. not pathetic! keep on writing!

OH, I can completely identify with the 'I needed to throw my emotions somewhere and on paper seemed like the best solution" I have whole notebooks filled with this. And my friends tend to get an earful too.

Aww, he sounds lovely! I've never met anyone that I fell for as hard as you seem to have. I think I look to hard for flaws. (There's a bit of self-analysis you didn't need but got anyway! XP)

I think the thing that's great about this is that it really is just emotion- it was obviously spilling anyway, and it's clear that you really feel what you've written.

Aww. Cute. Keep writing! XD