Did you lose someone- or did you move away from a loved on recently- that could be a reason why you had that dream- I liked it. I could feel the emotion from it.

'And as we floated down the hallforced along by bleeding eyes,I felt myself become alone.' i loved that part. you captured the feeling of being haunted so well, this poem is completely incredible. i haven't read anything by you in a while, so it's very refreshing. lovely job.