are you continuing on or ending it? cause it'll be REALY bad if u did

Well it's bin a long wait but i'm pretty sure that it was worth it :D Hehe so tiffany is actually sexually attracted to him... does he like her that way too? What happened to him?

Oh I love this story ^_^ I love your writing style, it's very fluid and well written. Your pacing is wonderful and this is a type of story that I haven't read before. It's original instead of regurgitated;)

I love Micah's pet name of "little goddess" for Tiffany, I just love that. His first words to her and she was half asleep. I really liked that.

And a reward for her? Who the heck set that up? Her creepy step dad who would have probably had a go at her if she stayed with him? Or has mommy straightened out however unlikely? Hm...

Like Micah's protectiveness and this chapter here we were getting into the more romantic intentions of the relationship.

I like how they're coming together slowly but surely and not too slowly either. As I said before the pacing for this story is great:)

I really hope you plan to continue with this, I can't wait to read more of it!

you need to deffinly finish this story it is so great and it seems real but who knows it could i look forward if you do add to this story to reading it you make it seem so real you make the reader feel what the charters feeling and thats a talent good job keep up the good work

you need to add more this is a really good story a really really good story

I am enjoying the reading immensely! However, be careful that your keep details in order, because you changes Micah's age from one chapter to another. I believe there were a couple other little detials that changed, as well, but I don't remember them seeing as my head is such a fog atm. I can't wait to read more!

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