You have a very honest tone behind your writings, not hiding behind anything. I love that in the way you write, this poem is no exception.

Wow, I can imagine how your brother must feel. I was there once in his shoes, me and a friend. But I fessed up, before she caught me. It was so hard, and something I sorta regret. I lost her trust too, and her friendship. Now however with your poem, I have a better idea of how she feels. If you're interested, read my poem "Walking On Eggshells" to see how one feels to be on the other end of someone not trusting. I like the honesty. It's better than keeping it in, and not saying how you feel. My friend never did that.

I'm returning the favor. This was interesting. it leaves me wondering about your brother did. Maybe you should make a sequel? Something to think about.

Anyways, I am 15. What grade are you in? Cause some people are freshman and are turning 15 in septemeber. Thanks for wishing me happy birthday and if I can remember I'll wish you happy birthday, too. But, if I can't...happy early birthday! :)

Like girl, what on earth happened? I want all the scoop! I think!Lol, anyway, this is cool, although I don't have this kinda relationship with my bros, but yea! Cool!

amazing.i dont really trust my siblings that much it must be nice having one as someone you once trusted

I've enjoyed this piece very much. It's straight forward and points out all the feelings that one would go through in this type of situation. Good job.

This is great, so powerful and emotional. Well done once more! V x