This is very cool. I like it a lot; it's very expressive and says a ton for being so short. I like the usage of the vocab words, very cool. ;) Always nice to turn a crappy assignment into beauty. :) You did an excellent job.

*laughs hysterically* It's not that the storyish thing is funny...but the fact that it is a school assignment, and you sound so very happy to have written only 55 words using 4 vocab words.

Short, but powerfully concise. I'm now gonna say something awful, but you know my beliefs on truths. Vlad Tepes was a supporter of truth and he has one the hearts of sado-masochistic children everywhere. I didn't feel like counting when technology is more effective, so according to Microsoft Word, you have 54 words. Think of another one that works in perfectly.

i love it, very well written and extremely inciteful, well done.