This poem is very similar to "Pain" and hit me the same way. The short, hard, lines, the words that scream softly of agony and love at the same time. Beautiful.

*wide eyes* Wow! Short and simple but oh so vivid...and I seriously wish I was a good enough artist to draw out what your poems make me see in my head.

Desire, That touched me deep. And what can I do but oblige? What can I do but oblige? You know I will. Just await my return. And I will fill all the needs we both have, fill our hearts and minds and worlds with realities of sadimasochistic lust and love, romance and rage, sorrow and sex, hate and harmony. 10 days, and 9 when you read this.

very cool! love it.

OMG...WOW...this is so bloody amazing, the way you use the choppy lines is great and i just love the flow and the whole concept of cutting as an art form is used well, this is by far the best poem i've ever read, never stop!!