*grumbles* I'm running out of ways to explain your poems differently...but I still love them and still want to let you know what I think of them.

Pay close attention your email said. What could I miss? I realize destruction and insanity come with this, but you're right you will be "again made whole" in both "body and soul" and though it is a kind of destruction, it is not quite death. Not the same destruction. Now for the lit crit. Your beat is good, and your emotions, but your rhyme scheme is weak. whole and soul shouldn't have to be changed, as they blend beautifully, but hide and eyes is kinda stretching it, though it still works. Then again, the off beat pattern that comes together at the end could symbolize the way that it begins with destruction and ends with the last line--in deliverence to something greater.

OMG...i totally feel like this right now and the way you describe it, is just amazing, well done, this is one powerful piece!

nice. very good. cheers